literature

Corpulent immorality. ver.2

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Encroaching territories newly anchored
charms the artful tiger. His fur is slick. White and ravaging, streaking night and ruddy rose.
Pervasively forward is his outstretched paw; Clawed and momentous.
This aphonic, sovereign beast with his silent roar.
Through the suggestions from the lovely (yet neglected by me... u_u; ) =caveatLECTOR I have come to a new version of this poem. I must say I feel better about this one even though I'm still nore sure about the line breaks. Hmm...

Well, comments welcome. Of course, knowing me I won't get to them for another six or seven months. o_o'
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noir-detective's avatar
I think I prefer this version.

Oh, and I love you! :hug: